in storms
thunder barks
and windows rattle-
brave dogs
cower and howl
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This is my second attempt at a tanka. I'm still not completely comfortable in the style. I noticed after the fact that it combines two things found in Laurence's [link] tanka - storms and dogs. It's actually a coincidence I think. It just happens to be storming here right now and my poor dog is going bonkers.
 As always I'd really love to hear from the haiku and tanka community how this attempt works in terms of the style. |
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Very clever... and beautifully portrayed...as always
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And sometimes there's a third, even deeper level, and that one is the same as the top surface one. Like with pie.
-Dr. Horrible's Singalong Blog
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"I'm part of an awesome Mafia RP group here on da, My characters are Amelia Clark of the Dordoni and Cayden Adolfo. Are you in the game?" #The-DorDoni-Family
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This amazing icon was made by =checkered-fadora
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And sometimes there's a third, even deeper level, and that one is the same as the top surface one. Like with pie.
-Dr. Horrible's Singalong Blog
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And sometimes there's a third, even deeper level, and that one is the same as the top surface one. Like with pie.
-Dr. Horrible's Singalong Blog
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~Joseph Conrad
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